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New Post! Jan 08, 2008 @ 19:54:03#31
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Yo,
this verse is deticated to ma mama,
sry guys, but i gatta turn it into drama,
mama, i knw ur readin this,
first off i start by givin u a kiss,
u always cared fo' ma,
'nd thnx 4 the extra luv tht u gav ma,
i always wanted u to lsn to tupac shakur,
"Dear Mama" is deticated for u, 'nd its pure,
no bad words, tht u always wanted me to stop sayin it,
'nd u always say "STOP RABBIT" till i desided to quit,
make ma skewl project 'nd wen u ready u tell me "GO SUBMIT"
'nd always tell me go get an 'A' till i made it,
this verse goes on tupac words 'nd beat,
Dear Mama lsn to it, u'll find it so sweet,
thnx for all tht u gav ma 'nd all the care,
'nd wen i was sick u always thinked abt ma welfare,
while havin chicken pox 'nd while havin a flu,
u always helped me 'nd gav me the medicin too,
'nd im sry for shoutin to u, 'nd for not being the son,
u always wanted, 'nd i 4got wut u did 4 ma wen i was young,
u always wished to hav a gurl instead of a helpless man,
u always told ma to do 4 u wut eva i can,
im sry i wasnt the son u always wished for,
cant bring u wen ur ill anythin from the store,
sry for shoutin to u evry tim i saw ur face,
but i can say tht no woman can tak ma mama place,
i always c u cumin from hard work,
'nd if thr is no food u always called the clerk,
thnx for evry piece of rise tht i hav ate,
i always c u cumin destroyed 'nd fix us a hot plate,
Dear Mama ur so great, i giv u 10 from 10 if u escuse me to rate,
ther is no way i can pay u bak,
but thr is no way i can show u tht i understand, :P
i dunno y evry tim i try to be gud,
but i mix evry thin 'nd get u rude, understood?,
'nd sry for evry problem i mad 'nd evry drama,
when things went wrong we'd always blame mama,
I finally understand,
for a woman it ain't easy tryin to raise a man...

Chorus "Tupac Shaku Chorus"

Lady...
Don't cha know we love ya? Sweet lady
Dear mama
Place no one above ya, sweet lady
You are appreciated
Don't cha know we love ya?

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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 00:38:56#32
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ayorabbit said:
Yo,
this verse is deticated to ma mama,
sry guys, but i gatta turn it into drama,
mama, i knw ur readin this,
first off i start by givin u a kiss,
u always cared fo' ma,
'nd thnx 4 the extra luv tht u gav ma,
i always wanted u to lsn to tupac shakur,
"Dear Mama" is deticated for u, 'nd its pure,
no bad words, tht u always wanted me to stop sayin it,
'nd u always say "STOP RABBIT" till i desided to quit,
make ma skewl project 'nd wen u ready u tell me "GO SUBMIT"
'nd always tell me go get an 'A' till i made it,
this verse goes on tupac words 'nd beat,
Dear Mama lsn to it, u'll find it so sweet,
thnx for all tht u gav ma 'nd all the care,
'nd wen i was sick u always thinked abt ma welfare,
while havin chicken pox 'nd while havin a flu,
u always helped me 'nd gav me the medicin too,
'nd im sry for shoutin to u, 'nd for not being the son,
u always wanted, 'nd i 4got wut u did 4 ma wen i was young,
u always wished to hav a gurl instead of a helpless man,
u always told ma to do 4 u wut eva i can,
im sry i wasnt the son u always wished for,
cant bring u wen ur ill anythin from the store,
sry for shoutin to u evry tim i saw ur face,
but i can say tht no woman can tak ma mama place,
i always c u cumin from hard work,
'nd if thr is no food u always called the clerk,
thnx for evry piece of rise tht i hav ate,
i always c u cumin destroyed 'nd fix us a hot plate,
Dear Mama ur so great, i giv u 10 from 10 if u escuse me to rate,
ther is no way i can pay u bak,
but thr is no way i can show u tht i understand, :P
i dunno y evry tim i try to be gud,
but i mix evry thin 'nd get u rude, understood?,
'nd sry for evry problem i mad 'nd evry drama,
when things went wrong we'd always blame mama,
I finally understand,
for a woman it ain't easy tryin to raise a man...

Chorus "Tupac Shaku Chorus"

Lady...
Don't cha know we love ya? Sweet lady
Dear mama
Place no one above ya, sweet lady
You are appreciated
Don't cha know we love ya?



s**ts tight i would let out one of mine but i caint trust too many ppl


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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 00:40:25#33
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but nah im not talking about anyone on here but u caint be too sure


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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 00:41:17#34
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some one already stold one of my raps ....... he aint known dough


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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 00:41:24#35
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That's so gangsta


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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 10:34:58#36
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luk YOUNGLUX...u gatta rit a tall rhyme lik the one above....if u realy wanna share ur skills 'nd things in ur lif 'nd all this s**t...maan..u knw wut....jus' do it !!
"NIKE!!" :P :P

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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 20:52:41#37
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pshhhhh o aint really gotta show my skill, i dont feel like it rigt now


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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 23:24:00#38
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They think they crazy but they ain't crazy, let's face it
Shit basically they just playin sick
They ain't s**t, they ain't sayin s**t, spray em' wit me,
A to the K get in the way I'll bring AKA LEBAN wit me,
And turn this day into f**kin mayhem, you stayin wit me?
Don't let me lose you, I'm not tryin to confuse you
When I let loose wit this Uzi and just shoot through Leban head wid this Isuzu
You get the message? Am I gettin through to you?
You know what's comin, you motherf**kers don't even know, do you?
I'll kill thiz racist bitch who always hated me 'nd all the white hommiez, wanna play futbol u s**t go to hell go stand goaly, fat ass, afta 4 hours tht pissed me off tryin mak u understand, u aint a man, a man understand wut he cant 'nd wut he can, "ooh im fan of tupac shakur, y no body asked about him, u racist bitch, u hate black ppl thts why u lik slim" understand bitch, i wish tupac shakur was rich, but he was takin money 'nd didnt giv bak thts it, thts y he was dead 'nd no 1 rlly asked abt him, slim tararararaa...yeaah am a fan of eminem !!
ths all wut i'll say now cuz im tierd nxt tim i wont leave u LEBAN !! :@

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New Post! Jan 09, 2008 @ 23:44:18#39
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Sorry leban....i was angry !!!
PEACE OUT!!!

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New Post! Jan 12, 2008 @ 22:52:02#40
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ye shorty blitz in this bitch i no im the s**t wen u on my dik sukin likin it fukin tworkin it round bitch

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New Post! Jan 12, 2008 @ 22:58:23#41
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my first rhyme was wak so here it is

Shoti blitz back in this bitch

i no tht u wana battle me but u cnt c tht lyricly i be the man u see i gt style i gt grace ill smash u in ya fukin face tht rhyme at the top tht aint hes its anotha dudes rhymes tht tht bitch makin hes i no i mite b a lil onceeded or even a lil pissed bt this dude aint s**t till i step up n diss bwah bwah

hows tht s**t 4 ya dik head

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New Post! Jan 13, 2008 @ 19:28:04#42
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ayo,
atlast a guy showed his skills 'nd made this topic real,
but yo, dun think tht u'll battle me 'nd win cuz i'll turn it to amityville,
do u knw wuts amityville, (haha) no, its not a new McDonald's meal,
dun think its unreal, it can turn u 'nd ur mama into steel,
'nd younglux y ur soo afraid we r all brothers here,
lets mak a deal, wen u feel ritin rhymes rit on a paper 'nd type it here, weneva u feel,
yo sxistevo, thts ur 1st forum u visit i guess,
if its lik tht thn all the ppl plz welcom our new guest,
but yo, we gatta c ur skills so plz tak the rap test,
its simple..jus' rit 10 to 20 lines so u can show ur the best,
'nd hey yo, i wont rit too much, cuz i knw it wont be read,
so excuse me..i gatta hav rest excersises on ma bed...

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New Post! Jan 16, 2008 @ 23:01:22#45
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ok ok ok

dude said drop 20 lines
but if i do this topic will be mine
just by dropin 10 ill shine
ayorabbit come up wit ur own name
but if it was urs den eminem took yo fame
same way i took yo girl, turnin my mama to steel
damn dog u need to chill
why dont U eat a MCDonalds Happy Meal
quality is better den quanity
if u dissagree den get at me
dog dont worrie we all brothas
droppin some line wont get to us
just enjoy it and have fun
kinndda like wat me and rabbit just dun
any new peepz think yall can rhyme
den go ahead spit it aint no crime
we wont discriminate
so no matter how f**ked up da rhyme we all straight


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