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Oct 23, 2009 @ 01:16:09

Theonetheonlycp

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17/M/Bloomingdale, Georgia
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Not to sure where this goes but this is something i wrote hope yall like

Jump into the sea and feel the water take away all ur worries and wash them away. All the pain, all the worrow gone with just peace fo mind left. Peace of knowing your leaving your life behind for the better of all reason. Into the sea where I take my pain and sorrow. So i can have peace of mind...

I know it sounds liek somethign missing but i cant think of anything else. If u have any suggestions just tell me. thxs

Oct 23, 2009 @ 03:10:24

panda

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41/F/, Texas
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Is that about your Happy Place? Mine is near a river with trees and exotic animals all around me. Everything is beautiful and peaceful there. I'm sure you'll think of something to add to it. Good luck.

Oct 23, 2009 @ 12:29:53

Theonetheonlycp

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Hmmm... yeah i guess it is. A deserted island with a huge forest at nite with a full moon shining on the sea making it shine...
Well didnt think of anything else to write on to that, but now i know my happy place

Oct 23, 2009 @ 12:46:52

panda

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Theonetheonlycp said:

Hmmm... yeah i guess it is. A deserted island with a huge forest at nite with a full moon shining on the sea making it shine...
Well didnt think of anything else to write on to that, but now i know my happy place

Good. I go to mine sometimes when I'm stressed and it helps me fall asleep. My dogs and son are there, too. Have you written anything else?

Oct 23, 2009 @ 12:50:04

Theonetheonlycp

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Nah i was to busy last nite and i just woke up. But ill finish it sometime or start work on something else

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