This is a rap song that I made up based on Lil Wayne's song "Fire Man". Im not that good at rap but I just made this one for fun
Anyway, tell me whether it was game or lame.


Intro(People laughing and talking in the background of Club Inferno)


Girl#1: Hey girl, did you here Lil Wayne's new hit single "Fire Man"?

Girl#2: Yeah girl, that song is off the chain!

Girl#1: I play that song over and over again, I can't stop playin it!

Girl#2: Me neither girlfriend!

(At this moment a fine young man enters the club wearing a sky-blue
suit with diamonds on his grill, watch, and neckchain. He overhears
the clubers raving about Lil Wayne's new hit single.)

Young man: Lil Wayne? What's the big deal about this new song "Fire
Man" Man I can do way better than dat! I'm gone show dem
how to do this right. Things are so "hot" in here it's
time to cool things down a bit. It's all about the ice.

(Song begins)

Ice Man: Yo,yo,yo everybody listen up, dis is da Ice Man, If you
haven't heard of me, I'm a real O.G. Now I know things are
all hot in here and dat ya'll don't like the snow, but just
so ya know, dis man is the show. So I suggest ya'll put out
dat fire and let's go.

Ice Man(Song): Ey, ey, dis is the Ice Man,
Yes dis the Ice Man,
I ain't no Fire Man,
And I ain't tryin,

It's the bling yeah,
Check out my ring here,
Got diamonds on my grill,
Ya'll know that I'm for real...yeah


I run the streets,
I can't be beat,
Some suckas wanna knock me,
Some suckas wanna jock me,

I used to think that I was hot,
But soon discovered that I was not,
I'm a gangster made of ice,
Don't play wit me cause I ain't nice...yeah


I know ya'll n**gas hatin,
Cause ya'll know I don't be playin,
I keep the bling real,
While some suckas wanna steal,

Cuz what's wrong you wanna steal,
You see this necklace here worth seven mil,
I'm the Ice Man you know the rule,
So keep it very cool or I will bury you...yeah


Dis is the Ice Man,
Yes dis the Ice Man,
I ain't no Fire Man,
And I ain't tryin,

It's the bling yeah,
Check out my ring here,
Got diamonds on my grill,
Ya'll know that I'm for real...yeah


N**ga, n**ga wanna rip my rep hunh,
N**ga, n**ga wanna get dis ice hunh,
Bu****it, you can't steal dis mil,
Yo n**ga, I'm just keepin' it real,

I'm a real O.G.
Can't no sucka bust me,
Man you know I run dese streets,
Try to flare up heat and your a** will get beat...yeah


All my ladies in da club don't drop it like it's hot,
All my fellas in da club don't grind her cause she hot
Let the Ice Man keep it cool,
Ya'll know keepin it cool is my general rule,

Blizzards on the east coast blizzards on the west coas
My homies keep it cool while dem otha f**kas roast,
A brotha want the Fire Man, s**t f**k you man,
Just remember one thing that I'm da Ice Man...yeah.


The End


All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream.

Have you come up with some type of rhythm for this yet?

Yes, I have the rythym although I have to work on getting it in sync. How did it sound?


All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream.

I thought IT sounded Tight!

Thanx


All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream.

It's okay. It doesn't match the fireman instrumental at all, though. I would try to stick to the song if it's a fireman freestyle. Or long planned out lyric.


I abstinated last night. It was incredible!