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ForumNazi On December 28, 2016




Bossier, Louisiana
#1New Post! Nov 12, 2015 @ 19:07:23
As you lie back your muscles tighten. You put him off for a while searching for an excuse, but he refuses to be swayed as he approaches you.

He asks if you’re afraid and you shake your head bravely. He has had more experience, but it’s the first time his finger has found the right place.

He probes deeply and you shiver; your body tenses; but he’s gentle like he promised he’d be.

He looks deeply within your eyes and tells you to trust him-he’s done this many times before.

His cool smile relaxes you and you open wider to give him more room for an easy entrance. You begin to plead and beg him to hurry, but he slowly takes his time, wanting to cause you as little pain as possible. As he presses closer, going deeper, you feel the tissue give way; pain surges throughout your body and you feel the slight trickle of blood as he continues. He looks at you concerned and asks you if it’s too painful. Your eyes are filled with tears but you shake your head and nod for him to go on. He begins going in and out with skill but you are now too numb to feel him within you.

After a few moments, you feel something bursting within you and he pulls it out of you, you lay panting, glad to have it over. He looks at you and smiling warmly, tells you, with a chuckle; that you have been his most stubborn yet most rewarding experience.

You smile and thank your dentist. After all, it was your first time to have a tooth pulled.
twilitezone911 On March 25, 2019




Saint Louis, Missouri
#2New Post! Nov 13, 2015 @ 03:41:45
that's much better, than you have written before. you are focus more what you are saying. you are using humor in the right part of the story. you are structuring better, not to go overboard. I mean short the story is better, you don't use need long storyline to start, or real long story start work up to them. there was one or two story or poems last couple of days, you wrote. either started a fine and then got lost and when a different direction. it is a true, that you write only things the best, not things, you are not. once again, this above is probably one of the best, you have wrote since been on the forum. don't stop writing, just find what are a good at, and write that.
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