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May 07, 2008 @ 22:57:39 | #187 | dickbell
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24/M/The Grassy Knoll, California Join Date: Dec 2007 | aceswild said: ok all you freestylers out there its your time to shine. everyone make a song!  heres my atempt....
Yo TFS are you listenin to what im spittin
Im gonna go to KFC and get me some chickin
I post like a fool in the middle of the night
Maths got me down but im not goin without a fight
Think i cant rhyme worth a dam?
Then ask Snoopy and he'll tell you who can
Its me slow poke
I aint no joke
Cause I roll with the punches
Even though my mommy packs my school lunches!
...Ya im signing with a big record lable soon
-MC Skittles
Not bad, doesn't sound like there's a beat though. Your bars are a bit erratic, but not unimpressive.

sillygoosey said: that's cuz Dick makes me scream! Hooray me!
Also Known As A.K.A.Dick'llMakeYouScream | | |
May 08, 2008 @ 05:18:53 | #191 | robert
Apprentice 50 points


18/M/Lancaster county, Join Date: May 2008 | see what you made me do,i gotta get you,
f**k you and ya mama,no drama,when i pop the lama,
you the type we cant trust,me and rap its love not lust,
diss yo punk a** is a must,got one kid drinkin gas,the other one is eatin glass,here comes the other one with a s**ty ass,
jordan you know your gay,dont make me tell these peeps bout ray,oops
dats all im gonna say,we know ya moms is a trick,we know you suck dick,we know sharay will leave her kids quick,yall think ya cool,im no fool,welcome to school,join the class,you cant pass,why?cause your a dumb ass,we saw sharay standin on a block,sellin her pussy for 4$ a knock,stop!!!!oops did i scare you,your in my water crab,you cant get out its to far to grab,loose som fat your startin to flab,yeah i was an inmate,but thers only so much a top kracker can take.
TK see ya for now! | | |
May 08, 2008 @ 07:17:29 | #192 | dickbell
Mega Über-Meister 3195 points


24/M/The Grassy Knoll, California Join Date: Dec 2007 | You wanna f**k with The Dick, like slick s**t,
You think you put it on the air and you got yourself a hit?
Now listen, 'cause this ain't as bad as it gets,
So I'll just flip licks at you like knives till they stick,
And slice open your arteries, till you're bleedin half-heartedly,
Put you in a party dress, and call your bicth a** Marjorie,
Is it hard to breath? It seems your strugglin' to rhyme,
Step out of the car, sir, can you walk along this line?
You stumble into traffic, so they slap you with a fine,
And all because you can't even keep your beats on time,
And you don't know what a bar is, but I know what a stolen car is,
And if you try to take mine, then you won't get very far, bitch,
If I continue to go at this, It'll take up the whole page,
A new age of rage will be waged as my anger goes uncaged,
'Cause I'm that killa gorilla, that's shaded vanilla,
You got a problem with me? Well I don't know what to tell ya,
'Cause the problem with me is that I might just up and kill ya,
Stick you in the back of my truck with a tarp to conceal ya,
Then drive to Home Depot, pick up a roto-tilla,
And a bag of lime, to bury you, so no one can smell ya,
I don't know why I do this, just that I feel compelled ta,
Every time you step up, I'll molly-whop you acapella,
Beat you with your own patella, If only out of pity,
You say you're from Midway, I wouldn't call that a city,
Pretty s**tty, are you with me, while I'm spittin' this little ditty,
Hell, I may even bring up your fetish for Hello Kitty,
And you're talkin' about flab? You know you like your bitches fat,
They put on their strap ons, and you take it up the ass,
It's your last gasp, put your severed head on a hat rack,
And wait till your stench makes the neighbors call haz-mat,
You should be ashamed, 'cause your rhymes are absurd,
Here you're gettin' shown up by a white boy with a slur,
You've got no talent, unbalanced, like a three-legged elephant,
I'm finessin', caressin' the mic with some gangsta like elegance,
Got agression and stress and anger, like I'm livin' life celebate,
But I'm not I've got so much twat, I've gotta start sellin' it,
So beleive as I'm tellin' it, your half a** rhymes are irrelivant,
I'll take your life and your wife with my knife, just for the hell of it,
I don't even want to beat you, I'm not even into it,
'Cause if I step over you, I'm only steppin' in dog s**t!

sillygoosey said: that's cuz Dick makes me scream! Hooray me!
Also Known As A.K.A.Dick'llMakeYouScream | | |
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