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New Post! Oct 31, 2005 @ 06:07:41#1
nos482

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26/NA/Elsie, Michigan
Join Date: Oct 2005

RUN WITH ME
By James J Easlick

I feel like ive fallen into a new world, a world only for the strong
how can this world feel so right yet seem so wrong?
i feel the moon and its as caressing as the sun
my instincts are telling me to hunt and run!
your only rival is the beauty of the night
I want you to run with me under the dark moon light
can you see me changing into my true form?
dont be afraid i wont let you come to harm
the world is changing as i fall into these dark dreams
my reality is getting faded and ragged seams
cant you see i need you by my side
you are the only one i know will not hide
can you feel the fever of the change?
can you feel yourself rearrange?
now the night is ending and we are returning back to reality's embraces
and of our otherself there are no traces
until we return to the night..
please let me know what you think?

On November 18, 2005
New Post! Oct 31, 2005 @ 06:32:42#2
natalie

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Join Date: Jan 2005

i really liked it! good job!

On October 24, 2009
New Post! Oct 31, 2005 @ 09:22:35#3
keighley

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21/F/Newton Stewart, United Kingdom
Join Date: Sep 2005

Good work!

On June 15, 2006
New Post! Oct 31, 2005 @ 12:08:24#4
elektrakosh

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31/F/, United
Join Date: Sep 2005

It gives me the impression of a were wolf!...Nice!

On September 29, 2007
New Post! Oct 31, 2005 @ 21:28:21#5
crazybeck

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22/F/Willenhall, United Kingdom
Join Date: May 2005

loved it....how long did i take u to do?????

On January 18, 2009
New Post! Nov 02, 2005 @ 00:31:50#6
wristband

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21/F/Emerald City,
Join Date: Aug 2005

That was really cool. I liked it, and it was really well-written. I kind of got the vampire/werewolf impression, and that was cool.
Keep up the good work!

On July 19, 2009
New Post! Nov 08, 2005 @ 14:54:27#7
geezer

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41/M/highlands, United Kingdom
Join Date: Nov 2005

shocking, that was in my magazine last week, you cheat!!!

On December 17, 2005
New Post! Feb 03, 2010 @ 02:25:14#8
freakeystyleydan

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18/M/canterbury, United Kingdom
Join Date: Feb 2008

*sigh* I'm beginning to remember why I abandoned this sub-forum in the first place....

On February 15, 2010
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