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New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 04:39:53#1
maeb

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15/F/Kamloops, Canada
Join Date: Mar 2008

I love the way the sun looks
How its light dances in those always running brooks
I love the way the wind sounds
Soft yet loud and always around
I love the colour of the leaves
The only foliage with that gentle shade of green
I love the way the sky goes on
It never ends and stretches until the break dawn
I love the way the moon glows
It’s the same shining light that’s seen by all no matter how far left or right you go
I love the rain
The sound it makes and the smell it creates
Truthfully I love it all
I think it is impossible for me to hate the season we call fall

Okay, personally I dont think I am all that good at poetry but I would like to know what the rest of you think.


The Plate Remains Unfilled ~Jeff Hardy~

maeb last visited August 31, 2008
New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 07:28:04#2
uchihababe

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I think ur good! I write some poetry but I can never get the point across and still ryhme...so I think you have talent.


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uchihababe last visited June 22, 2008
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