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New Post! May 07, 2008 @ 02:12:40#1
arrian

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18/F/St. Paul, Minnesota
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Of the million things that I could do
I'd love to spend my day with you.
Of the million places I could go
I'd never leave you all alone.
Of the million people I could flaunt,
You're the only one I'd want.
And of the millions with who you'd be
I'm thanking God that you chose me.


Set me free, your heaven's a lie...

arrian last visited June 03, 2008
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New Post! May 07, 2008 @ 02:13:58#2
chocycandy

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awww thats nice!


you do what you gotta do

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New Post! May 07, 2008 @ 02:19:37#3
impfina

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did u mean by flaunt to show off all the people u could have or..?
kinda doesnt make sense with it.


Arie

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New Post! May 07, 2008 @ 02:21:54#4
arrian

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flaunt like... oh, look, i can be with this super model or famous actress!

But instead he chose me who's just...me.


Set me free, your heaven's a lie...

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New Post! May 07, 2008 @ 02:23:07#5
arrian

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18/F/St. Paul, Minnesota
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thats backwards lol. i mean... i could have anyone but i'd only want him lol


Set me free, your heaven's a lie...

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