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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 19:33:41#1
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So while I've hit a wall on the first "Terra" story, I'm gonna work on this one. I'm not really sure what to do though cos I've got two ideas to work on and I like them both.

So the story's called "The Amulet" and the amulet is the point of the story really. In version one, Terra's been cursed and the only thing that can save her is the amulet. In version two, the amulet is part of the curse and it was made specifically to destroy her.

I've already started a development on version two but I can't get version one out of my head even though I'm not sure where that one would go. What do you guys think?


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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 19:45:12#2
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erm version one mixed with version two, terra has been cursed by an amulet if she takes it off it will kill her


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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 19:45:39#3
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the first one

or

combine them and she has to find it to stop the curse it put on her


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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 19:46:57#4
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amulet is part of the curse and it was made specifically to destroy her


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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 19:49:07#5
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Thanks for the opinions guys. Keep them coming and I'll try to work this out.


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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 22:24:54#6
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What if there were two amulets? Then you won't have to kill off one option nor get them both mixed up.



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New Post! Mar 24, 2008 @ 11:47:53#7
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Thinking about two ideas at once can prevent progress on either. New projects are always more interesting than an old one but you have to find the discipline to finish the first one before moving on.


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New Post! May 06, 2008 @ 02:26:07#8
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I think it sounds wicked.


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New Post! May 06, 2008 @ 06:29:18#9
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arrian said:
I think it sounds wicked.


Thanks


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