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New Post! Jan 20, 2008 @ 19:53:35#76
jjyoung

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I shouldnt have to respond
Im american and dont read from the karan
arab, listen
u just mad because i got signed and you wont stop bitchin
as for your friend, thuglife
he should get a different name like sircutshimselfwithaknife
signin autographs on my moms pussy?
yo man shes dead, mind if i borrow your girlfriends loosey?
Yo and ayo
why u talkin bout limp bizcuit, lay off the yayo
its just u and me and no1 else
Thuglife, Find something different to burn about
mom jokes are like kindergarden s**t, find another wayout
Strappin bombs to yer chest isnt the way out for suicide either
keep doin it though, U.S. will bomb yer a** like a pill to a fever
Im not racist, im just pissed arabs think they can rap
when they're whole dictionary consists of carbombcrap
So hand over the mic and step off the stage
you wont be around much longer anyways, the next history book wont have u in it, turn the page
You all frontin like yer good
what u know, yer from iraq, not from the hood
from what i recall, i made 10 grand last week
sellin my ryhmes right from the street
funny cause i didnt see u guys there
probaly at home killin yer own civilians like you just dont care
I cant beleive yer even talkin about Obama
At least hes american and way better then Osama
And ayo u say my face is a disgrace
u havent even seen it, but u will one day in a presidential race
Become the leader of the U.S
Have the FIB hunt u down like the ghost of xmas past
Sayin I get f**ked by a pig?
I dont know what freaky s**t u do in Iran but im gonna light up a cig
Use your people as ash trays, because they mouth is too big
alot of s**t comes out, so ill put some back in
Then god will send me to heaven as i got rid of all your sin
I shouldnt of had to begin
But u respond with so much crap I had to take the trash out again
You guys have no right to have eminem and tupac as your profile pictures
They rap way better, and its a disgrace to them that you try to use there literature
Im about to leave
but before i go, im gonna take a shower cause i got too much s**t from you, peace

jjyoung last visited March 31, 2008
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New Post! Jan 24, 2008 @ 21:25:55#77
ayorabbit

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yoo kid
i didn' understand a s**t from ur s**t
u gatta quit
no 1 in this topic rlly admits it
sayin i dun rap betta thn celebs as if u do
makin fun of our pictures as if u got 1, do u?
'nd y the fcuk ur makin fun of arabs 'nd quran
how cum im from too many countries lik iraq 'nd iran
Sadam said "THUGKID, THTS NON OF HIS PROBERTY"
so the KID said "I KNW SIR, BUT JEALOUSY IS A MISERY"
JEALOUSY is wut young DESTINY got to be
ur tryin mak sum TROUP
but G no 1 can rlly bothers me
fcuk LPz, Long-Playin gay tapes in ur mouse-house G
wer r ur Keyz, did u gave thm to the gays tht sells u fleece
thy r not actualy gays, thy fcuk an animal but thy although'll get the HIV
u wannabe, dun act lik a philosphy 'nd tell me wut I AM
tell me wut i already knw
wuts left too say how much i weight by grams
damn, b4 u rit this s**t u fcukin cram
lik a family tryin to say sumthin gud to thier son tht swam
eminem, 'nd 2pac got nothin to do wid the battle booy
u jus' seem to be lik a stripper's stripper strippin toy
click the button, s**t cums out
close the button, "wut hew's talkin abt"
evry one heard the shout, BUT
stripper lets hav a bout, MUTT
giv YOUNG a kick on his, BUTT
u knw wuts jjyound real name is, WHAT
no body knwz, all his hommiez r hoez
suppose he played in 1 of de othaz nose
the otha plays in his ass, 'nd thts tha way it goez
i gatta go
to watch the show
dun be so horny thts not a gay show
tak it slow
hoe, ur now my foe
u knw, so im waitin fo' mo'
now cya so
AAAYYOOO !!

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New Post! Jan 26, 2008 @ 05:00:04#78
jjyoung

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You obviously dont know when u lost
my words stick on you like frost
cold but to the point directly
And at least i know how to spell correctly
Yer f**kin 14 and have nothin to show for it
except a pair of tits and a fat clit
You always talkin about me being gay
alot of balls for a kid to be puttin on the tray
come back and do some real raps when yer balls drop
thats if u had any so let me clean yer s**t up with a mop
The reason why i dont got a profile pic
is cause im real and dont use other people's s**t
like how u try to front like em
u nothin like him, hes the cremdalacrem
And you are right about how drugs kill you
but yer idol em does them so why u frontin and whats it to?
Funny too kid because my troup u call
has records out that are gettin sold at the mall
So step down from actin tall
cause u aint s**t in the world of rappin after all
O by the way yer from all those countries cause there all the same
Different places but same people like you, lame
So before you post again, get on yer game
a little late though cause u lost all yer potential fame
U aint bad for a kid
but u gotta stop knowin so much bout gay porn vids
every rap u add s**t like that in
makes me think yer gay, and u just want me to win
Well anyways homie, i got some some real cd's to sign
maybe if yer lucky one day you'll have a company like mine
Time for me to take care of some adult business
but until then f**k you and merry xmas

jjyoung last visited March 31, 2008
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New Post! Jan 26, 2008 @ 09:34:40#79
ayorabbit

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hahaa, wut a show
under the nam of jj hoe
lsn foe, i want u to knw
if u think ur pro
let me tellya no
go away, u aint s**t
think u won, dawg, try thinkin abt it
y cant u admit it
stop ritin such stupid rhymes 'nd submitin it
all ur rhymes r two lines
shows no signs of two kinds
go up luk at mines
atleast it rhymes
mo' thn 4-6 lines
'nd shows all kinds of signs
'nd by the way, i didn eva saw a gay vid
thts the only gud thin in a 14 years old kid
y ur showing off wid ur age
thts all i can c in this page
a fcuked up rage
on the F.S stage
the kiss, i release in this diss
is lik a diamond released in a piss
i realise a gayness by readin this
u call this diss a rapin rhymin words on the mic
once u get behind the mic
its lik a b**** is singing, he is a lame tonight
from the sound the ppl'll die
but dun mak this guy cry
now i gatta go, bye bye

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New Post! Jan 29, 2008 @ 14:00:45#80
jjyoung

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Funny how you make fun of my raps only being 2 lines
When there as long as yours but my are better did u see the signs?
They told you stop
everyone is laughin at you even the people who buy my cd's from the block
Realin in my money like a cash crop
I see you changed yer profile pic
was that before or after i told you em was almost sick
And i never cry from stupid s**t people right
I let them talk s**t then make raps that are tight
Put them down and say goodnight
If i ever saw u there would be a fight
I cant believe you havent been shot for the gay s**t u write
I bet u cant even freestyle
You have to type your s**t u must be in denial
As my raps shine through in their glory bein reconciled
Recognized at that, like yer hoe mom bein defiled
I brought up age man because it shows maturity
and obviously ill show when yer mom has a kid at the maternity
And f**k that, she aint gettin no child support
she f**ked like a arab I feel like I got short
Well mr. ayorabid raps
i got to go but ill pick up a trumpet for the end of your road, music peice is taps

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New Post! Jan 29, 2008 @ 17:51:02#81
ayorabbit

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daaaamn, luk at ur verse
i should've started first
anythin u'll say will be reversed
same as u got cursed
s**t, ur a fcukin kid
with a kit, rittin on it
"NO SHIT"
i mean "NO IMAGE"
run 'n scrimmage
dun worry
u'll still be 1 of the group teenage
c, i wont eva stop hatin gays
i wont get shot cuz i liv here
i can talk abt thm in many ways
thiz is 1 of the best arabs careers
'nd dun talk abt arabs again
ur insane, sumtims say its between me 'nd u
'nd times u dun use ur brain
r u tryna entertain
wut u ganna gain from talkin abt arabs
is thiz dissin me ??!
try to explain
luk, not evry verse u'll start by "haha" or "funny"
mr.young bugs bunny
ur starvin to death, u dun evn got a tummy
this guy is talkin abt arabs cant be fed or feed
while hes the only 1 tht dun' got money to eat
luk, u got family to feed
'nd all ur fcukin money ain't enought to water a seed
leaven ur family starvin 'nd die 'nd u hangin wid Gz
wuteva please, 'nd kissin knees
u'll still leave ur family eatin last year's cheese
'nd otha treez leafz, till i cum 'nd giv thm the ease
'nd pay thm all the feez, 'n a new house keys
'nd sum peas, to start farmin 'nd plant treez
'nd get mo' thn a disease
'nd fleaz, start cyclin around thier head
wish u luck, 'nd wish ur family r dead
as i said, GO AHEAD !!

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New Post! Feb 21, 2008 @ 22:41:25#82
ayorabbit

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hav u eva sat in the streets
wid the guys lsnin to beats
wid the guys eatin sum sweets
wid the guys throwin wet sheets
wid the guys throwin big stones
wid the guys stealin 'n returnin phones
name sum stupid unknowns
'n share wid brotha all ur moans
playin futbol 'n winnin teams
no high noses, play de kids
teenagerz dreams
a sofa full of burgers 'n one large super supreme
'nd five extreme
'n after tht, thrz no waay we can do regime
'n one last ice cream
hey all of u can u imagine the theme
we r all africans except for two
but we r no' racist, we r neighbours 'n homeboyz too
all da street want to join our crew
no leaders no rules, evrythin we do is true
wid each otha we grew
bt all the time we walk on the same clue
aftr all.........THUGS GET LONELY TOO !!

(yo this song is deticated to ma homeboyz i hang wid in the streets most of the time..jus' to say tht thy r the best but atleast one day u'll feel lonely...thts life)

('n the last sentence sayin..THUGS GET LONELY TOO...iz a tupac's song..i jus' heard it...'nd luved endin the verse wid it)

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New Post! Feb 22, 2008 @ 19:02:29#83
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yo my name be Dr.Phil
please tell me your life story
half the time i dont listen
cause its either dumb or boring
ill tell you a little secret
if you look at my head closely
see that little bald spot
if you touch it i get horny
im an annoying little f**k
but i always tell the truth
i take pictures of little boys
and jerk off in a photo booth
but cut off my foot
when im laying beside shaq
its the wrong one dumbass
whatever i cant act
just call me Dr.Phil
poeple say it all the time
but imma loser for what i do
just give me one more pill
imma pop before i do this
give me a stick of gum to chew
Dr.Phil, hey phil! doctor please help me out
little timmys stuck in a well
and all he'll do is shout
hes screaming your name
i think he wants your cock
hes sitting there crying
holding on to your sticky sock

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New Post! Mar 17, 2008 @ 17:13:53#84
jjyoung

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As a response to your last s**t
i didnt understand one thing u said trykk
yer raps only rhyme with the last work in every sentence
try rhymin every line differently then may you will get penance
dont know the word look it up in a dictionary
thats if u can read u f**ked up 14 teen who dont know when they should stop sedentarily
If u woulda went first that woulda of made my job too easy
s**t, my g's are in the background sayin u killin fo sheezy
so get off my back
and back onto yer mothers lap
its about 12 at night aint it time for yer nap
bitch u dont know one thing about me nor none of the s**t i went through
my whole life story aint made up like yours but true
O btw, u should stop followin those rhymes like u got a stride
u would be better off pumpin yer fists up for gay pride
Your mom too bro
i never f**ked that i would probaly get a disease and grow an afro
some arabian cold is like doin yer girlfriend, too old
well i gotta go and record some records truth be told
hold up i just found out 10,000 copies were just sold

haha join the army and die for your country by our hands bitch

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New Post! Mar 18, 2008 @ 05:10:39#85
ayorabbit

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hey yo jj young..do u hav a space
r u tht guy tht replaced the sun glasses wid ez face
OTERODESIGNS, LiL JJ OKAY..then
ma men checked ur space 'nd thy wer lik disgrace, okay men
'n.....if ur not the 1 im talkin abt thn shut the fcuk up bitch
go now, its time to smell ur mamz a** till u start to twitch
bow down u fcukin slave
didnt i told u fcukin behave
now go ask ur mutha how i fcukd her 'nd how much i gave
'nd btw...dun 4get to tell ma b**tch (ur mutha) to grap the blade 'nd shave
wut !, ur mutha used to live in a house named as a cave !!!
'nd dun eva talk abt ma country or arabs again
atleast we dun've gays, lesbians, homosexual kids 'n inanes
'n FUCK PENNSYLVANIA !!
callin ur self the Keystone state thts a large estate
for a plate, callin itself the UNITED STATES
c i knw how to read
'n indeed i did by rittin this rap tht u need
to cell thm 'nd feed ur fcukin family sum weed
till thy bleed 'nd u send thm to be a particular breed

"'nd yo G, i knw u nva went through trouble u jus' wanna be me !!! "

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New Post! Mar 19, 2008 @ 15:48:52#86
jjyoung

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Of course i dont know what your talkin about
you ran out of stuff to say because yer still an infant, pout
after i make fun of your country u get embarrased
so u try to rip on mine, u.s.a the most fairest
not like iraq the most welfare'st
dont try to cover yer misery in worthless rhymes u speak
no1's fallin for it yer s**t is too weak
as mines concrete
u cryin because my rhymes are tearin up yer ass, take a seat
u traveled down the wrong path to mess with me boy
sayin i have little f**k toys?
the only ones i know are the ones yer smut mom uses
after i stole them from her and sold them to travel on cruises
lol ya she had that many, sorry
hustlin off yer moms fetish, yes a true storay
well its about 12, yer bed time right?
im sure u have good parents ya little gansta dyke
hard livin in iraq i thought they were poor?
howd u get a computer, robbin a cornerstore?
nope yer mommy bought them for you
haha, well thats cool i made all my money myself with my Dead parents to help me, so go ahead and get yer crew
sayin my crew are hoes
maybe but at least they chicks and not bro's
and that leads me back to u and gays**t
everytime we go down this road it leads to u bein gay likin dick, not clit
well i got to go cause im sick of yer s**t
got a cla** to go to
called college u twit

payce, and dont make fun of my rap name b/c so far mine is known in pa unlike yers in iraq sadam hussein

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New Post! Mar 20, 2008 @ 19:26:29#87
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this rap is for ayo rabbit...i rote dis in lyk 5 - 10 mins
so it sux.... ayo rabbit can u guess who i m..



yo omr, u scared me wit da story of Amittyville
buh its OK i went home n just had a chill
i was scared n went to masjid
u knew it was scary.. den y u told me dat scary s**t
n u told me to take a walk
buh i said no coz dats how a gansta talks
da next day i woke up 6 in da morning
den DJ hassan said "whos ur opponent"
i said its Omr.. buh if he fights wid me ima take him down
buh if he rides wit me..he will just drown
whats dat..is dat a rap u wrote
sounds lyk a knife went down ur throat
nigga u betta stop snitchin!
or i m gona start jaw breakin
yo if u r f**ked up.. put ur cocks up
nigga i m in da hood, whats up
u see i m a Gangsta ,n i m a Hustla
so its either thank ya or f**k ya
i m down wit u b!tch u aint gotta pretend
suck ma cock nigga n run da club ur in ..haha
dats all da time i got 4 now
peace out..see ya..chow!!!!

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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 00:58:56#88
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Join Date: Dec 2007

yo! I'm on this forum site like butter on bread
watching people get brodi by the smallest thing said
cause love is overated all ya'll wanna do is hate
and when every things tight ya'll wanna instigate
I'm tired of ya'll niggas acting like you got game
Cuss your brotha out thinking that you putting him to shame
Dem pussy a** lyrics need to simply just stop
You no longer know the meaning of the real hip hop
Listen to the old schoolers, you could learn alot
Our words were not intended to get a nigga shot
It's the advancement and enhancement of the soul my friends
And if you're not spittin the wise you're just playing pretend
Don't mean to intrude, hope you find this not rude
Just trying to spit some knowledge to the bitter and the crude
This is the real O.G coming to you from the south

And I'm out


Beware when the great God lets loose a thinker on this planet
-Emerson

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New Post! Apr 10, 2008 @ 06:37:47#89
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hey jj u r rong in each n evry word u rot
first of all, im not a fukin iraqi u son ofa goat
now lsn to me carfully, 4get abt countries
cuz if we talked abt countries, i'll win cuz ma country
started life infront of me 'nd yeaah we wer hungry
but now we r rich, ma mutha is not tht bitch
lik ur mutha stealin toys from unda ur bed
u wake up once, saw her, 'nd shot her in her head
'nd now shes dead, now i knw how ur parents r dead lik u said
'nd atleast lik u said i got good parents not lik urz
cant afford a home sweet home, u sleep in stores
'nd i said ur frndz r gays not hoes...
'nd so ma frndz r bro's but not gays lik urz
now im rlly bored cuz of ur rap 'nd thz borin battle
now lemme go to ma frndz remence 'nd relax in our castle
we play futbol 'nd trouple the world lik O.Gz
'nd buncha otha felonies
from A to Z lik spellin bees
'nd b4 sumbody bunch us 'nd fel on knees
we bunch bak
we started the attack
wasnt sayin im black..
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now get the hell out of here !!!

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