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Old Post! Oct 18, 2009 @ 05:04:31#1
sue2

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59/F/cornwall, United Kingdom
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She sits alone in her chair
watching, waiting, hoping.
Shapes and shadows pass the window
but still nobody,just nobody comes.

Footsteps echo, but only in her mind
confused visions intermingled with memories
of a distant time and place
faces sometimes smiling,sometimes sad.

Arms that once held, caressed,
protected,shielded,hugged
now sometimes shaking
harsh,frightening and aggressive.

Where are these faces and arms
do they care
are they gone forever
lost and forgotten.

On November 22, 2009
Old Post! Oct 18, 2009 @ 05:22:43#2
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Ghostly. Has a kind of "Eleanor Rigby" feel to it. I like it.

On November 22, 2009
Old Post! Oct 19, 2009 @ 06:54:40#3
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Thank you very much

On November 22, 2009
Old Post! Oct 31, 2009 @ 23:54:14#4
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Heart of a poet.


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54/F/Somewhere on Earth,
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I kudoed this and was interrupted. I liked the feel and the flow. I'd never want to be this person.




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Old Post! Nov 01, 2009 @ 06:49:27#5
sue2

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Thank you. No I am glad I anm not that person.

On November 22, 2009
Old Post! Nov 01, 2009 @ 06:50:40#6
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That's really good





The problem with adults is they spend the first part of your life teaching you to walk and talk and the rest telling you to sit down and shut up
On November 22, 2009
Old Post! Nov 01, 2009 @ 06:52:12#7
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Very nice poem, Sue2...




On November 04, 2009
Old Post! Nov 01, 2009 @ 06:54:08#8
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Thank you very much

On November 22, 2009
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