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New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 07:24:09#1
uchihababe

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Looking around you can easily tell
who belongs to what.
Everyone has a group or clique to belong to.
No one who is anyone is left alone.
Yet people are alone just a few though
Who do you think the people alone are?
You wouldn’t know unless you really try and look.
Even me who is one of the people who are alone do not know.
I look around and see people living a lie trying to find a place to die
Maybe we are something important to the world or
Maybe we’re nothing at all to this world and need to disappear;
Without a trace, without a goodbye, and without a single word why.
Just need to get away and disappear
Is it easy to die by your own hands rather then another’s?
Or do we really need to live and feel something to actually live?
No matter what we try we really never try to disappear
We could run and never come back. Strive to live, hold on to anything precious to us.
Is there anything we can do besides live a lie.
Stop lying to yourself, we can try and pretend we are not who we are.
But inside ourselves we know what the truth is.
We can never really hide who we truly are just who we act to be.
Does this make any sense to you?
Maybe, maybe not, who really knows?
We can try to hide the pain inside
Never can we hide from the darkness that is always lurking around the corner.
It will always be there lurking behind very choice we make
For every turn in life we have something following good or bad
Does it only follow people who feel alone or people who are alone?
This is something I think every day and yet there is no answer. Why?
Why is it that people who are alone see what others don’t?
Why are they alone?
Is it because they choose to be or because of what they see?
Looking around everyone has a group or clique to belong to.
Everyone has a place to belong
Everyone has something to do
Everyone has someone that cares about them
Everyone has a friend
Mine just happens to be the darkness

Just something I wrote a while back, let me know what u think


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New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 07:45:25#2
lilbear

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Very deep and dark in your world and many other's, but I'm sure if feel around you will find that you are not alone in the dark.

Very good description of loneliness or choosing to be alone.


I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. And I know you do the same things too, So we're really not that different, me and you.

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New Post! May 12, 2008 @ 14:47:05#3
whiteboy16

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That is another one of your deep dark stories i guess and what do you mean your alone you have Me, Nick, Sky, Jenny, Juan, and of course ur B/F George...


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New Post! May 13, 2008 @ 05:40:13#4
uchihababe

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GEORGE IS NOT BF!!!!!
this POEM was written before i met all of you


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New Post! May 13, 2008 @ 05:41:21#5
uchihababe

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lilbear said:
Very deep and dark in your world and many other's, but I'm sure if feel around you will find that you are not alone in the dark.

Very good description of loneliness or choosing to be alone.


thanx! ya i'm not alone anymore


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New Post! May 13, 2008 @ 05:42:43#6
hiro

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I never read it


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