The hallway grew quite as the note was read.
It named the reason why two friends were negative one
Why a boy was negative a dollar
Why two brothers were one less sibling
The teachers chocked while they read the note to the class
That one note gave the reason why so many people were sad
Why they were missing one friend
The principal came on and announced a moment of silence
That note gave the reason why three people were put in jail
She was only 15, so young
And yet that note read
That she had got shot in a drive by
She was air-lifted to the hospital…
Where she later died

Ya this poem is called 'The Note' I wrote during school because I got bored...Tell me what you think...srry its a little depressing.


Girl who can kick ur ass

OMG that is defently you always bored always writing sad and disturbing stories well its really good I cant believe you thought of that all by yourself i am so proud of you now you finally know how to write a good story and not one that will put me to sleep...lol Can you write another? I hope you will see you monday.


Drive to live, live to drive

i think you did a great job.. you should be very proud of yourself.. i am looking forward to read more of your masterpieces.